Some techniques that were educational or helpful: 14.1.1: They are jointly diagonalized by construction. 14.1.5: Typo. Last symbol should not have tilde. As stated, a trivial bound is epsilon. 14.1.6: You can get \delta instead of 3\delta by only bounding on of the two operators in the square. 14.1.8: This is just a repeat of the classical derivation. 15.5.3: Only the stated inequalities are used in the original proof. 15.5.4: Add the typical subspace projector in (using the gental operator lemma) before applying the Hayashi-Nagaoka inequality. 17.3.1: Entropy is now larger. One interpretation is that there is now more state with which entanglement must be preserved. 17.4.1: The equality is due to (17.42).